As much as this video does have potential, I felt that this video was a bit half assed. However, throughout the video, I saw some nice art, and design, overall it just felt too childish. The character animation definitely needs some work, and the mouth movements need some improvement, and the jokes are too typical, so try to put some originality into whatever you choose to do next.

I'm honestly impressed! I enjoyed the humor and honestly I've watched this 20+ times and it has yet to get old. Love your style Jaltoid! Keep it up! :)